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Review:orangezauber says:
Ha ha. You are right. Trying to read the story while really thinking about Nyx's thoughts does make her sound a bit insane. However, if we were to write down all of the stuff that goes through our head I am sure we would sound insane as well. At least I know I would sound insane if people could hear my thoughts.

There were a couple more typos. I know how you feel though when it comes to revising. I often miss typos because I know what I am saying and I just glance over everything without reading it. It has gotten me into trouble a few times. Anyway...one is near the middle I can't exactly remember the conversation but the word "it" should be "it's" and then the second typo is near the end when Nyx is comforting Peter. Unless you really meant that she "robbed" Peter's shoulder. I think it should be "rubbed".

I am still really enjoying the story. I like Nyx a lot so I don't mind that the story is a little heavy on her. You said she is fun to write well I think she is really fun to read (thoughts and all). Thanks for posting once again!

orangezauber

Author's Response: I know I would sound insane, even I think I'm a bit nuts sometimes :P there's just that point where you shake your head in a what on earth are you thinking kind of way. I'll try and iron out thouse typos once the queue's reopened again. And maybe she robbed him of a shoulder.. :P somehow. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying what's left of the story, and that you've stuck with it this far! Thanks for reviewing once again! Alex.

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