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Review:dream_schmean says:
Hey there! It's dreamschemes from the forums here to give you your review, and sorry for the wait! But here it is!

So first off, I really enjoyed this chapter. (: I liked how you retold the Epilogue, but really gave a good insight into what Albus was thinking. Typically, I'm not a big fan of Slytherin!Albus, but I'm intrigued to see where this is going and if he is actually in Slytherin.

Although, I noticed that there was a bit of a loss in the feel of things when Al began to talk to Teddy. And also, I'm pretty sure that Teddy is about ten years older than Al, so they wouldn't be in school together, and Ted would only be there to say goodbye to Victoire. Unless that's necessary to the plot, feel free to ignore me. (:

I noticed nothing wrong with spelling or grammar, so good job on that! And aside from losing the feel for a short amount of time, it was very realistic, especially at the beginning, during the intro.

Thank you for the request, and feel free to re-request!

dream_schmean

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