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Review:Capella Black says:
Who? Who? WHO!??? Must find out who is behind the door!

Before that though... great chapter. This really filled out the details of her deception, which I have been puzzling over since it was first mentioned. This was a great reveal - clever and intriguing, and perfect for the situation. Loved it.

Also loved watching Umbridge collapse - she would want Hermione out, but she would also want to save face with the Ministry, and so her actions here are perfect. Really good characterisation, which added to the story as a whole beautifully.

And so onwards...

Author's Response: Ahh the suspense! Although as a whole I don't like cliffhangers, this one I felt was necessary as it moves the story into a whole new direction. Plus, it sort of breaks up the chaos of this single chapter, which I have to admit probably took almost as long to write as the upcoming Gringotts chapter as they both relied heavily on the events presented in the book itself for such major events.

I just love torturing Umbridge, Hermione escaping would have realistically been one of her worst nightmares, and I just felt she would have hated beyond anything else because it defies everything she set up for the Ministry and of course, the deception had to work down to the last detail, which took forever to work out! Although I'm glad it worked out in the end!

Thank you so much for all your reviews, I feel awful that it's taken up until now to finally answer them all! Thank you for the effort you have put into reviewing all these chapters with all your words of encouragement and brilliant advice! :)

- Ashlee

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