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Review:Capella Black says:
This is definitely my favourite chapter so far! I love how you've pulled together all the major plotlines - what's going on with the whole apparition thing, how Hermione and Draco actually feel about each other, and the missing details about the trial. This chapter just has a completeness and flow that's brilliant, and each new piece of information was both interesting and compelling.

And the ending, oh how I love the ending. So much so that the next chapter is beckoning me franticly...

Author's Response: I felt with such a long story there would always be those chapters which tied the major plotlines for that section of the story together and this was perhaps one of the first of about three which I have planned in my notebook dedicated to this one story. Although with 100 chapters I felt I needed to be somewhat prepared lol! Although then again, I have to throw something new into the mix with each chapter so I hope I achieved that here too!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the ending, the ending I feel is always the most important part of any chapter, and of course any story so a lot of what I write has a strong focus on where it will end inevitably. I don't know why, but I do write most of the last few paragraphs first, this chapter was no exception!

Thank you for reviewing! :)

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