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Review:Capella Black says:
Cliff-hanger alert! And thus, alert that my review will not be all that long, as I need to go find out what happens next! Love the tension at the end of this chapter - will Hermione be able to pull off her half-blood status, or will she be kicked out. Love your Snape too - very curt, very dismissive, but never actually cruel or vindictive - the perfect double (triple?) agent.

Great stuff, must read more ASAP!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! I'm only just getting around to replying to them all, I'm sorry it's taken me so long!

I personally love using Snape in this, I try not to make him cruel but rather as you picked up very dismissive instead. I try to make him seem somewhat tortured but I suppose that doesn't really come across so much yet. He was the perfect double agent and I suppose this is why he holds so much intrigue for me as a character.

Thanks so much for your review! :)


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