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Review:Akussa says:
Another very interesting chapter. I really love your writting style, it's almost poetic. Once more you did a great job at keeping the mystery alive and adding more layers to it. I like that you take your time, slow chapters that give the reader time to accept the new mystery that just unfolded; you do not drown the reader in too much at a time and taht is a great strenght you show.

Your descbritive style is excellent; how in so little words you manage to give the reader a good idea of the scene, the characters and the environment. The way you described the two new characters, with only their voices, small features and, mostly, their behavior was really interesting; it is true that we learn a lot more about a person by looking at the way he holds himself than how he dresses himself.

I greatly enjoyed this chapter and will read with gret interest the next one.

Akussa

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Thank you for commenting on the way I introduced those two, I've been curious about how it reads. Thank you, again.

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