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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Hey, here is HarleyQuinn from the forums!

Firstly... I have to say that this story was some seriously hot stuff. I think the temperature in my room rose a few degrees. xD You've described the seductive scene extremely well, it plays excellently with the imagination without giving out too much. I cannot believe this is your first fic! I liked everything - from their little game in the beginning to the end when it was not an a game anymore.

On another note, it's always a bit hard for me to accept that Mione and Draco can so easily forget the bad blood b/n them and just jump each other. But this is a one-shot and obviously it would have been pointless to write this stuff, so I'll just imagine some hot glances stolen b/n them during the year. ;)

And judging from this chapter, you probably can write an awesome tantalising novella-length Dramione. I hope that you do it one day, because I have the feeling that it will be absolutely delicious!

All in all, good descriptions, well-written dialogue and steamy plot. Well done! I really enjoyed it. :)))

Best,
Kaileena

Author's Response: Thank You so much for reviewing :)

I was aware that it was another fic where Draco and Hermione just seem to end up together so that's why I decided to get her drunk because then she wouldn't be her 'normal' self.

I've got a longer Dramione planned that I'm going to be writing in the summer when I can work on it properly.

I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you again for such a detailed review :)


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