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Review:theelderwand says:
I'm not quite sure how you did it, but this little one shot is powerful, more powerful even than your first, which was a barn burner.

Farmgirl, this thing is just chock full of hope. Simply magnificent.

Painful to see my hero Molly so besdie herself with worry and anguish. I never considered it, but it makes infinite sense, with Harry, Ron and Hermione on the run that she would be like this (good thing she didn't know Ron was at Shell Cottage!). The worry must've came close to destroying her. Your most brilliant flourish has to be her holding the ornaments that Harry and Ron made the year before. God that was powerful!

Leave it to the consumate optimists (and criminal masterminds) to lift her out of her despair and do it in proper, defiant, twin-like manner.

I really loved this tale. And, your gift this christmas just keeps on giving.

I really can't thank you enough, and I'm proud to have you as my HPFF little sis!

Merry Christmas


Author's Response: Wow, two review responses in one day! Perhaps the world is ending! hehehehe

Eldy, you always manage to make me feel like a million dollars when you give me a review. I'm not sure my stories always deserve it, but I would be lying if I said it wasn't nice. Thanks for looking out for me so well - you really have this big brother thing down!

I'm sorry I made Molly so upset in this one. I knew you wouldn't like that, but I hope I made it better in the end. And I did really want the chance for the twins to show they were more than just goof-ball clowns. (And yes, it's a VERY good thing she didn't know Ron was at Shell Cottage!)

Thank you for the comment on the ornaments *blushes*. See what I mean about making my head swell?

Anyway, I love Molly. Okay, so I love all the Weasleys, but you knew that. I just think they are one of the most real, human, fictional families I have ever seen and I love writing for them. I'm glad you liked this, and I'm so proud to have you as my HPFF big bro!


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