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Review:rozen_maiden says:
Hello again (: nice to see an update! Haha.. Sorry I haven't gotten around to emailing you - before Christmas is the most hectic time of the year. I can barely find time to write!
I liked this chapter, but there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes (like 'Slytherin' instead of 'Slytherine' and ''I'm'' instead of ''im'') ... Other than that it was a nice continuation and introduction to the characters. You mentioned all the important and known names like Percy, Goyle, and Blaise, which was a good way to keep readers interested and a way not too make it too confusing. I also liked how nervous yo made her when she went to the sorting - it shows she's not perfect which is a really good trait to keep in a original character.
With the que closure I know I won't be seeing an update, but I hope I'll be able to see one after. Keep it up - you're writing just improves the more you do.
Hope to hear from you soon,
Mahalia x

Author's Response: haha thyanks for the corrections, ill keep that in mind as i continue posting! Goyle and Percy arent seen much more through the entire story, but as the series unfolds blaise is more important then he ever was in the original.

Thanks so much for the input on my original charactor it is so hard to try and fit someone you make up into such an amazing world. There is so many amaziong things i want her to do, so i feel getting deeper into her fears and anxiety may rane her down as a not so perfect being. I sent in my next chapter but i guess it might not be reposted untill the que is reopened.

Im glad you like it so far, as i am working on story three now and two is completed i feel they are just getting better and better and hope you stay around to see the real story and enemies come out that are revieled further on.


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