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Review:Sheriff says:
I enjoyed reading that :)

It is a good pretext for the story, I think, exploring the identity of the houses and questioning whether Slytherin is necessarily what it is illustrated as within the books. I am trying to do something similar in my own fiction at the moment, but in a completely different manner. It's certainly an avenue of the HP series that never truly seemed to be fully exploited during the original books.

I like the characterisation of Albus particularly: it fits nicely with the ideas in the rest of the story about a search for identity and an uncertainty about who you are. Hard to write much more off an introduction: I look forwards to Chapter 3!

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