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Review:ginnytwin93 says:
This is good, but not nearly as good as the first chapter. I feel like you weren't as connected with the plot... The best writing comes from something you've experienced. Do excuse my bluntness, but parts of it sound almost like an IM from a friend. While this is highly comforting, it doesn't quite fit the scene. I understand what you want to happen and are trying to depict, it's just that the wording and punctuation are a little off. This is still amazing and unbelievably creative, and I think that a lot of writers on this site could take a valuable lesson from your writing. Wicked awesome story though! Happy writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You have no idea how many times I have written this chapter. I think it ended up in a total of 5 times. Every time something went wrong. Computer crashed. Flashdrive crashed. Flashdrive lost. Flashdrive crashed again! Rejected 3 times. Everything that could've went wrong with this chapter, did. Eventually I just got so tired of it. I just took what was accepted. Maybe someday I'll comeback and fix it because I know how bad it really is, but that will be when I am not sicking of how many things went wrong with it. Thank you for your review! It was much appreciated. Hoping to have the next chapter ready to submit when the que opens up again!
Am. Ginny

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