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Review:Anna_Black says:
I quite like how you chose to wrap this story up. You kept to cannon, which I really like, because the reader does get the feeling that this could have possibly happened during the time of the Marauders. I have noticed that you've done a fair bit of research into the HP universe, because of your vast knowledge of HP trivia like plants and the like.

I would also like to congratulate you on your endurance and thank you for not giving up on this story. After all, it's not every day that we can find a finished 62 chaptered fic, which stays true to its characters and plot, never falters in intensity, style or quality, and manages to draw the reader into that imaginary world, which somehow feels very real.

All in all, this is definitely one of the best stories I have read on this site, and one of the very few which I am sure will stay with me for a very, very long time.

I hope there will be more of your writing on this site, and not just HTM related :)

Author's Response: Hi again!

Yes, I kept to canon. One of the reasons I wrote this story was because I couldn't find one that fit the canon as we know it without too much difficulty, and I wanted to fill in the gaps from this era. So I'd like to thank you for recognising that because I had a lot of people asking why I had to kill Laura - well, canon gives us a single Sirius so I had to end with that scenario. And yes, I did a lot of research and again it's really gratifying to have a reader recognise that. *beams*

I'm also super pleased that you think my story kept in character, plot and intensity because it's very long and while I did try to accomplish that, it's not always easy to tell if you've succeeded. So again, thank you.

Once my current series of one-shots is up I have plans for a Neville fic set in his seventh year, but things are pretty busy for me at the moment and will get more so next year so I'm not sure how quickly that will get up. Thanks for the encouragement though. :D

cheers, Mel

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