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Review:SeverusLove says:

Hellooo Cally! Great to see you again! And out with a new story already?! Hurrah! :) Don't forget my challenge too! :

First off: "Davies had the Quaffle and was weaving amongst the Gryffindor chases with a skill that made it look easy."

~ Please tell me you meant 'chasers' and not 'chases'! ( so that I get to finally spot a mistake, hah! Bleh!!! :P XD )

The graphics of the game wasn't bad at all! I kinda forgot a bit though, is this the game with Felix Felicix (is that even the spelling?) or not?

Also, I'm looking forward to an update in "Igniting the Ashes"! Great job!

Jaa ne!
~SEVVY (muahahahaha!)

Author's Response: Haha, yep. I was plotting some elements of ItA and decided I needed to know how good I was at writing Quidditch before I attempted it.

Dang! No, that should have been Chasers... There's always something you miss.

As for what game this is, the summary quote should have helped with that :P. It's the third game in Order of the Phoenix. Harry's banned and initially watches with Hermione but they get dragged off to see Grawp after Davies scores the first goal. There's a little more information at the start of the next chapter but generally I had a clean slate to work with.

And don't worry, I haven't forgotten your challenge, though it's a little more difficult.

Thanks for the review!

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