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Review:Olwyn says:
Hi there, requested reviewer here!
I enjoyed this, it's different. However, there are some stylistic things I want to discuss. If you're planning to write this way just for the first chapter, that's fine, good even. However, writing like this, with a lot, almost too much, detail, and a slow-ish plot is best for prologues/first chapters.
But I really like it, and I'd be excited to see what the future has for this. (heart) Olwyn


Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review; I really appreciate your feedback :)
The story is going to speed up a bit in the next chapter, and I see what you mean about how this style is best for the beginnings of stories.
Glad you liked it and this was very helpful,

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