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Review:dream_schmean says:
Hey, there! It's dreamschemes from the forums!

Wow. No, seriously, wow. This is really good, and I enjoyed it. I'm dying to read more!

The mystery factor really adds to the sort of creepy-ness and I find it highly intriguing. Your MC is very interesting and makes me want to know more about her. I'm just going to throw out my thought about her and say that her memory's been modified possibly? Or completely gone?

I don't think there's anything wrong with the plot holes, because it just adds to the mystery. And, plus, I'm sure it will be cleared up in upcoming chapters, especially with the whole MC-identity thing and who's come for her. But that's the whole point of a mystery, isn't it?

Thank you for requesting and feel free to re-request. (:

dream_schmean

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I was hoping as much for the plot-holes. It's really nerve-wracking, not knowing if I'm getting across to an audience or not.

I will certainly re-request, thank you very much. :)


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