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Review:_hedwig_ says:
Hey! This is narcissablackmalfoy with your review!

Alright, I'm going to nip this in the bud right now:

I know that she's his boyfriend, so she's going to love everything about him. But...

No "unflawed face and perfect grey eyes," please. It made me feel like a schmoe who reads cliche'd fics.

Also, I hope her character gets stronger as the story goes on.

The flow is good, and your writing is good! Great job!

Author's Response: Hey!

Good point, now that you mention it doesn't quite fit into the rest of the plot.

She does, at least I hope so.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

x Ely


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