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Review:baletgir says:
oooh Katie Bell, interesting. This may sound heartless and I could probably word it better, but I like that you had Katie's Mom die. It makes me think about her character and how much that could possibly have shaped who she is in the HP series. I also enjoyed her having a brother very much.

I feel as if this was lacking something though. Maybe it was the emotions were a bit off. I feel as if Mr. Bell would have been more reminiscent of his wife, and (possibly) wanted less to do with his daughter. I didn't feel much grief and mourning, but it was there a little.
Good job I thought this was interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really loved writing Katie's brother, reminds me a bit of my brother when he was two.

You're probably right, I should fix that up. But thank you for taking your time to review!

x Ely

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