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Review:moonbaby11 says:
First off, I just wanted ot say that I liked how you described the angel. The way her wings were dangerous and the way that you did not use 'angelic' or 'heavenly' to describe the way her voice sounded. I think that that is really setting your angels apart from the typical ones, so I liked that.

The ending was really good. I liked how you had Scorpius faint! :) As I said in my last chapter, he seems like he is going to be a really interestign character, and I like the way you are going with his personality. I love his snarky and sarcastic comments. I also thought that you did good with characterizing Hermione, especially with her being skeptical about the angel. That seemed like something that I could see her doing.

There were a few spelling errors I noticed, but nothign too major. They were mostly just typos. I think if you read it over, you should spot them right away. ;)

I think that this story is going along really well so far! :D You really draw the reader in with the first few chapters by jumping right into the plot. I'd love to read more so just pop by my review thread again!

Author's Response: Hehe, I loved the idea of a flawed angel. Even if they're only flawed in terms of their personality. Cassandra isn't nearly as righteous as you'd expect an angel to be, in fact, she's quite nasty at times.

I'll definately re-request a review from you once there have been a few more updates. Thanks very much. :D

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