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Review:liza_potter says:
Hello Ely! I meant to stop by your page ages ago, but I kept forgetting. And now I'm finally here. Yay! ^_^ This story looked so lonely, all with its 0 reviews self. So I thought I'd change that, and finally read some of your great work in the process.

I think I saw this challenge on the forums- you had to write about the entire life of someone, right? I'm so glad you chose Katie Bell (you know how I love my minor characters :P) She's such an interesting character, and there's so much you could do with her background and family history. Which you already did. :)

It's off to a good start, I think. You've made it interesting- Katie's mother dying in childbirth? How horrible. :( And you've introduced her family. I can't wait to see Katie's relationship with her dad and brother.

As awesome as a possum, this is! ;)


xoxo
Liza

Author's Response: That's alright. Ha, Thank you!

Yes, that's right. After your challenge, I had this obsession for writing stories with minor characters. I'm not sure how I'm going to get up four more chapters before Janaury though :/

I actually got the idea from this movie we were watching during class and I was like, 'hey that'd be a cool idea'.

Thank you!

x Ely


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