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Review:The Quick Quotes Quill says:
Ahhh!! such a cliffhanger!

Please write more, little bit desperate.

Love charcter of Willow, and this story is a great change from loads of really samey sirius/OC stories out there.

Love to know more about where alice is from and who she is, my only crititism would be that I don't get her character.

But I really love your story, keep updating!!


Author's Response: Lol it wasn't originally a cliff-hanger until my fingers just typed it without any input from my brain so I said I'd leave it ! :)
I makes me so happy to hear people think that this is different to the tons of Sirius/OC stories because that's one of the things I'm terrified of doing!
And as for Alice, I'm trying to let the reader learn about the characters as Willow does so if you don't understand her yet, then neither does Willow and so hopefully as Willow gets more involved you will too!

I hope that made sense! :S But Thank You so much for the review and I'm going to try my level best to get a chapter in before the queue closure :)
- Galawen xx

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