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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
I have to start from the end of the chapter, by saying that I love it how you write the danger into the Sirius/Lily relationship. I think it's in all of your stories with them, how Sirius' family is a danger for Lily and he's always so worried about her. It really gives something more to the dynamic in the relationship, although it already works without it too. Great to read a proper Sirius/Lily scene from you again!

James. First I thought, poor James, but then I was about to hit him when he burst in in the middle of the important conversation. Anyway, I like the way you write Sirius and James' discussions together. They really seem to know each other well and trust and defend each other to the end, like they should from what we know about their friendship.

And Dumbledore. You write him as the more annoying and not so fluffy kind of Dumbledore. And I do understand that because sometimes he is really annoying in the books too. I can also understand that Sirius has a somewhat different relation to him from Harry. Sirius is more of someone who wants to keep his own things to himself and act independently. Not that Harry doesn't do that too but he seeks more advice anyway.

So, well that analysis means that I enjoyed the chapter once again. Keep it up and don't be shy to post. This is a great story so far!

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