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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi! RandomRed here from the forums, I know 10,000 years late.

Anyway, I think this story is a great length, not too much waffleing but you don't miss anything out. Your whole setting out of the story as well it draws the reader in word by word. I love how your story is so calming, which sounds rather weird. Even if there was a huge violent scene, I feel it wouldn't have been violent reading.

Your story isn't a long fangled story, it is more like a moment in time. A section of a story. Which is different, a good different.

This story has a grat sense of the midwest, just by a few choice words you have used. It is really well done. :)

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: Oh that wasn't very long at all :D I'm glad you like the overall mood; I'm fairly careful about adjectives and I try not to use very many. And also that this moment made a sufficient story. Thank you for taking the time to review :)

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