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Review:Dalek194 says:
A very good start! I am intriuged and excited about where the story will go next; it is an excellent start to an alternate-timeline story.

It is written very well, and the only grammar I would pick out would be "her tony cottage"; tony should be tiny.

Besides his miniscule thing, this is a very impressive, though short, start to what seems like it will be an excellent story, please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm sorry I havent updated. I will add the next chapter as soon as i proof read it :)

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