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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Wow. Again, I'm wowed by your skill in writing such an emotionally fraught story. The detail in this is fantastic, from the dust in the Shrieking Shack to the people in the bar, it's fantastic. I was there in the story, watching it all and feeling it, too. The details you included for the characters themselves was also stunning. They emerged from the page, fully-formed, and this only added to the atmosphere and feeling of the story.

I'm most interested in your portrayal of Sirius here. It's a little different from in your other stories, I think, especially in his relationship with the other Marauders and his frustration with them. They're not a group anymore, their own personal problems overshadowing their friendship, and its Sirius who feels it most. However, he's still a perfectly canon Sirius, rebellious and pushing the limits to the extreme, very suited to his time. His emotions drive the story in an amazing way.

I really enjoyed reading this. Well-worth the wait.

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