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Review:loopyluna says:
I really enjoyed it! Of course I did! Don't be silly :P :D
I have been awaiting this update with anticipation, actually on the edge of my seat! I love this story!
I am in love with Sirius and Lily in this chapter, Lily seems like such a lovely soul and Sirius has really cleared up.
Lily's description of how she empathises with Victoria is beautiful, I've never seen it before, and a fresh idea in a Marauders story is rare :P :D But you've nailed it completely! I can't wait to read more!
Good luck in NanoWriMo.

Author's Response: Wow thank you!
I was really nervous as to what people would think about this story and especially this chapter so I'm glad you like it!
I wanted to make Lily sort of different to a lot of the other stories I've read and written, the main character either hates her with a passion and they become best friends or their insantly best friends in their first year so I wanted to make Victoria and Lily's friendship different.
I actually gave up a while ago, I couldn't make it pass 5,000 with exam stress and all :/

x Ely

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