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Review:angeless7fallenstarsong says:
Again, cute :)

I'm kind of wondering why Rory would have pointed out Dominique to Lysander if she knows he's gay...?

Typo - you're missing a space between "any" and "more."

Also, you might want to be careful. With the whole tomboy/rare-name/unique eye-color-yet-still-manages-to-be-pretty thing has Rory bordering on Mary Sue territory.

It always makes me smile when James II is like a replica of James I. I totally picture him like that. :)

All of your stories so far are characterized by really unique pairings and plots. So props, and keep at it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

She likes to poke fun at the fact that Dominique likes Lysander, it amuses her.

Oops, I'll go back and fix that, thanks!

I hope to add more depth to her character as the story progresses so that she doesn't come across as a Mary Sue-type.

Me too! I've always pictured him like James Potter I after the Epilogue in DH.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing everything and giving me some constructive criticism! :)


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