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Review:Ellerina says:
Heyo!

I really enjoyed the description in this piece! It painted a really vivid picture and I really got the American Midwest feel you were trying to put across.

I still have a lot of questions though. What happened to Teddy? Why does he need medication? I want to knoww!

This was a nice read and I got a great feel for each of the characters even in such a short period of time. Great job!

Annie

Author's Response: ANNIEEE! (I call this the TGS squeal before every review, as I've seen so many TGSers do it.)

Teddy, as I mentioned earlier, is sick from his werewolf blood in my mind. Though it could be anything. This is really translatable to original fic (I tried to make it Inception-ized for my beta. I almost got it. Almost. But Arthur is not skipping across the dunes in a skirt.), so it's just that sort of vague sickness that's there.

I'm really terrible at descriptions normally, so I'm glad I got that down! :D Thank you for leaving a review, love *hearts*


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