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Review:butterbeergal says:
I just had to check this out after that very enjoyable experience that was Tete-a-Tete (can't figure out why review box can't seem to handle special characters. Hmph.). You definitely managed to maintain the tension between them. You write Blaise really well. The bit about retaining his skin's natural vibrancy was priceless and made me laugh out loud. There was a time while I was reading this when I was wondering what in the world was wrong with Blaise, throwing all those scathy lines at Hermione. xD All along I thought it was Blaise's fault, so I was pretty curious why he seemed even more... bitter than Hermione, or at least the more pretentious between the two in terms of being all right with whatever had transpired between them. But towards the middle and end, everything clicked into place, and I just went 'Oh. That's why.'

Anyway, not quite sure if that ramble up there made sense, but suffice it to say this definitely made me think about your characters and their history. As usual, the dialogues were well-written, and I still loved your characterization of both Blaise and Hermione. Does this have a third installment? Because I'd definitely love to find out what happens next!

Great job!

xx
Gill

Author's Response: In theory there's a third installment... I've just been very remiss in terms of actually finalising it XD I always get distracted by those plot bunnies running rampant in my brain. Anyway thank you for yet another lovely review and all of your feedback. I'm thrilled you had fun reading :D

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