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Review:x0xShattered_Dreamsx0x says:
Hallo, here from the forums with your review!

First of all I love the simplicity of this piece. When I say simplicity, I mean that it's not 3,000 words like some one-shots and still manages to have the desired effect, and that is to be a pretty good story. I do not read too much on the Next Generation characters so I do not know what is the usually characterization for Scorpius and Victoire, but I will say that I liked your characterizations very much. While the story was't very long, it showed what it intended to show concerning the characters, their feelings, and mannerisms and that's good writing.

I like the longing in this piece and while its not tangible, I can still picture how Scorpius feels about Victoire staying with Teddy. You can tell when you questions her feelings for him and then how she isn't at all blinded and knows perfectly well what she is doing and what she is sacrificing.

All in all, a lovely piece. I liked it very much!

SD!

Author's Response: Hi! I haven't read any Victoire stories at all and hardly any Scorpius ones, so I don't know what the typical characterization is either. I just sort of run with it :D I'm glad that even with its simplicity, it managed to have a clear mood and message, which was what I was mostly worried about at first. Thanks for the review!

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