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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Hey, I'm so so sorry it took me so long to get onto this review! I've been insane busy with exams and NaNo, but enough with the excuses...
My first thought is how refreshing it is to see Dom, not Victoire, being the favoured child. I've always had a view of Victoire being the more snobby, Fleur-like of the sisters, so I definitely appreciated the change in perspective. You've included a lot of good background detail, like the relationship she has with her mother, father and sister, and generally you've introduced the character well while still leaving room for more development in later chapters. The one thing I would wonder about is the capitalisation of first year, fourth year, sixth year etc...it just doesn't seem like something that should be capitalised, but other than that, a very good first chapter :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

i'm glad you liked the role reversal, I always though Dom was just more perfect, not sure why, but that's how I see the characters. Maybe it has to do with Victoire kissing Teddy, I can't see a golden girl going for a guy like him...

I'm glad you liked the background as well. I'll look into the capitalizing of the years. I think I changed that in the later chapters, but i need to go back and edit the first ones.


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