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Review:Princesse Sierra says:
Hey...

The story and idea and plot are gripping... but the writing style... well, to be quite frank half the time I'm quite confused as to whose point of view its from, and who they're thinking about. Like that Astoria/ Harry moment which I couldn't make head or tail of. Could it be a little clearer please?

Author's Response: Hi (:
No worries. I'm really sorry to hear that you were having trouble understanding this. I've re-read the chapter and edited it again. My next chapter I've done my best as well, and that should be up if not today then tomorrow (im having troubles with my net). I really appreciate that you've told me this because its something I've always (ashamedly) struggled at. And I'm really sorry that it bothered you. I hope that the next chapter is a little clearer and thank you so much for reviewing!
Mahalia


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