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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey second last review here. :)
I have one typo. Here - "I can't sleep when you're made at me."
I am pretty sure you meant mad.

Anyway this chapter is so sad but not in a cry your eyes out way, like when Dumbledore dies but in a oh no it is over kind of way. Ok I know I sound weird.

I wish they would get together already, Remus and Sirius are cute together. In slash or not in slash.

You characterisation in this chapter is again good. I feel like a parrot repeating myself constantly.

I don't know if you did this on purpose but I love the fact that Sirius/Remus and Remus/Alice are in contrast to each other in almost every detail. Even the way they argue is calmer and less of a hurt factor behind it.

It feels kind of sad to be coming to the end of the story now. I have been reading it for so long. :) Oh well.

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: Hey. :D
Yeah, I meant mad. Now I'm wondering if I should fix that. I really don't want it umped back up in the list and at the top of my page again...but I'm so picky. Ah, sorry to ramble.

I know what you mean. :D Not weird at all.

Ah, it wouldn't feel right for me to have Sirius just bounce in all I love you and happily ever after, because things are so new to him. He barely understands what's going on.

But it was torture to not let them kiss. :(

It was directly on purpose, but Alice and Sirius are so far different. Which goes to show no matter how much Remus wanted to love Alice, he never really could have. :(

Well, I really appreciate the reviews for sure. :D And I'm glad that you enjoy the story. Thank you again. --Jenna


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