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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi again.I am nearly done now.Only 2 more chapters to go after this.
Ok so I knew that they would break up they had to for the story to work but the way it happened was a shock. Although I do like how she tried to fight for it. You have made me like Alice the further I go through this story.

She made him realise he loved Sirius. It was such a simple thing but it worked perfectly.

The end of this chapter was brilliant, it was light and showed Sirius and Remus perfectly. Their characteristion was amazing, they only way it could have been even better was if Remus had said something about Chocolate. Haha.

You pace is really well done, you've set everything up before they both find out what they had been hiding and such. The whole structure of the story is really well done. :)

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to review. :D

Alice has mixed reviews because on the one hand Remus/Sirius shippers (the hard ones) they instantly hate her. Nothing could redeem her for them for the simple fact that she shouldn't be with Remus. Then, the people who aren't so fanatical, take a good look at her. They can see that there is nothing actually wrong with Alice, she just shouldn't be with Remus. :D

And she gets past it. She won't become a whimpering mess. She's a big girl. :D

I so wanted to write that it was chocolate ice cream, but I try to keep myself from over-indulging in his chocolate references. :P

Thank you so much. :D --Jenna

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