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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey!
Before I start with my usual. How tall is Alice! I am just wondering because Sirius is described as a tall guy.

Anyway Sirius and Alice finally fought. I think you did it well and I like how even though she was mad she didn't shout out what she thought about Sirius liking Remus. It shows more of her character.

However that was not my favorite bit. I loved the little heart to heart between Sirius and James. It shows the foundation of their friendship isn't just pranking. Which we all know anyway but it is nice for it to be shown.

I am now off to read the next chapter :D.

Ginny45/RandomRed
xxx

Author's Response: Actually, Sirius was said to be shorter than James and Remus both. And Remus is the tallest of all of them. And Alice is the same height as Remus. So she has a good 5-8 inches over Sirius. :D

Gryffindor spirit. :D I couldn't have her screaming out her thoughts to the whole common room, that would be very Slytherin-like and petty. I don't want Alice petty.

Sirius and James, I love those two. I love their tight-as-brothers dynamic. :D

Thank you so much. --Jenna


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