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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey,me again.
I have one word. Wow. That was intense. Best part of this story so far without a doubt. You wrote the whole scene really well and it really grasps the reader and pulls them in.

It also shows how close Sirius and Remus really are as well and what Sirius will do to protect him. Your characterisation of them in this scene is brilliant, it is how they would react.

The end but with Alice is good as well. She isn't stupid. Alice is growing on me,she has a certain confidence, well she would have to, to accuse her boyfriend of being gay.

Your flow is again amazing. You have something important happening in every chapter but the background is still there.

Another great chapter, I am now going on to the next.

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!!

I always imagined that Sirius would be a rock for Remus. Whereas James and Sirius are brother close, Remus on the other hand is like another part of him. I don't think there's anything that Sirius wouldn't do for him.

Alice is far from stupid. :D Thus part of why she likes Remus. So, yeah, she is dead certain that Sirius' problem is jealousy, but right now, she's still a littel back and forth on if Remus feels the same. As for being brave, she is a Gryffindor :D

Thanks again. :D --Jenna


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