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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey RandomRed here. I amgoing to go through the rest of your chapters now. :D Starting here.

You have antoher great chapter here and in each one you add enough of the story to make me want to read more.

I think Alice reacted the right way, she is that kind of girl and I am very glad she didn't start shouting and screaming at him because that would be overkill.

Awww Sirius... he is so cute when he is Jealous. Although I still can't stand to see him and Remus fighting. However, it is necessary. The whole scene between Sirius and Remus was believeable and very in character. The only thing is, I find it hard to believe James wouldn't step in. Maybe that is just me.

Peter however would run... very in character.
On to the next chapter.

Ginny45/RandomRedxxx

Author's Response: Awesome, thank you so much. :D

Yeah, I never figured Alice for an over dramatic screaming kinda girl, otherwise her and Remus just wouldn't have clicked properly. :D I wanted a tough kinda chick.

James knows both Sirius and Remus well enough to know that they wouldn't "fight" fight. More like bickering. But he will step up to the plate. He's definitely more observant than people think.

Thank you again!! --Jenna


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