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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
Ello there, Cal! You know something sad? I originally read this story at 2am last night, and didn't leave a review. If I had, I would have been the first to review. Before SEVVY. Wouldn't that have been something?
Anyway, I digress. For a first story, this was very good. You evoked Harry's emotions very well, particularly the guilt, and you had some excellent lines. My personal favourite was the one about superficially healing the things he had caused, that was good. My one criticism is that the ending seemed a little rushed, but other than that it's a very good Day After the Battle story, and the mix of grief, tragedy and hope was well done :)

Author's Response: Haha, I think you might have been in trouble with her if that was the case ;)
Thanks for the comments. I did struggle a little with the ending and I agree that it's probably not the best it could have been. But if/when I get round to expanding it, then it won't really be the ending and I'll be able to ace it the second time round! :)

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