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Review:Remus says:
This was fantastic! Anyway...let me break it down:

Characterization: It was well done. No one was OOC which I appreciate a lot. I know its hard to make any of the characters act just like JKR would've done but some people don't even attempt to get close...anyway! I just wished that Neville was here...he was a big part of it as Luna. However, its your story. :)

Plot: Short and sweet. Perfect.

Best part has got to be when Ginny tells Harry that the battle wasn't ABOUT him but the freedom the Wizarding World needed. Yes, he was the poster boy for it but the people fought for their families. I absolutely love that. Wish Harry, in the books, had realized that because JKR makes HP seem very egotistic. I think that's the right word...

Anyway, maybe another one shot for Neville and Luna? The whole issue with Augusta finally being proud of his grandchild...idk...haha! All I have to say is that I enjoyed your writing style and would read any other one-shots you may have. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I was able to remain consistent with the books. My aim was to continue with Harry and how he'd be coping, as the books were told through his perspective and I wanted to try and continue that here. Sadly that meant limitting the other characters to the ones closest to him, as he tends to get rather withdrawn in these situations.

And yeah he does seem a bit like that at times. I wanted Ginny to confront the issue and she mostly speaks my thoughts on the issue. But doing this has left me worried I brought Harry around to my point a bit too easily but ah well.

Hmm, a one shot for Neville and Luna would be challenging. Interesting, but quite daunting. I'll have to think on it.


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