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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi!

I think you can do more work on this chapter. I think Feliciti needs some serious development throughout the flashbacks of this chapter and the following ones because it's difficult for me to see how this extremely naive, over-the-top girl becomes the very calm serene women we know in the present. Regulus also seems to fall in love with her extremely quickly, it would have been better if his feelings had developed through the previous chapters, rather than hatred-then-love.

And also, Regulus does quite a lot of magic, and wouldn't he get in trouble with the Ministry for that?

But otherwise, nice chapter! Feel free to re-request!

Author's Response: Hello :) I've sort of had an idea for this story to be a bit selective of its flashbacks and so, her character isn't fully developed. But there is a twist at the end of the story that'll explain everything about her character! So yes :P

And about Regulus falling in love with her; I don't think i've hinted this in the story, but he's sort of fallen in love with her through his observations between her and Sirius.. :)

Yes he does :P but I think I read somewhere that the ministry can't actually pinpoint who's conducted the magic, so since he's in the proximity of his parents, I thought of him to be covered by that :)

Thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreicate it!


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