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Review:seekers_destiny says:
Don't worry too much about how long it takes to update. I consider quality much more important but some might disagree with me. I loved the H/G reconciliation and at first I thought it went too smoothly after all that had occurred but then I realized that the impediments were gone and Harry was very grateful for what she'd done for Sirius. Fortunately Ginny wasn't interested in holding a grudge. Harry still has a ways to go in being a good boyfriend though - at least give her a hug!

I really loved the ending - it's a nice cliffhanger. The Sirius/Aurora encounter was a nice lead in. No errata this time (at least I didn't notice any).

Author's Response: I'm glad you aren't concerned with the time it takes, and I definitely think that a great deal of people would prefer I update frequently, even if the chapters are shorter. Though I can relate because I know I love getting speedy updates from addicting stories, but being a writer definitely gives insight as to how difficult it is to keep to self imposed deadlines (which, I never stick to, haha).

Yes..I thought it was best to not have Ginny make Harry "work" for her forgiveness, though you're absolutely right..they still have a little ways to go. Harry didn't want to overstep any boundaries by hugging her or anything. After all, he DID accuse her of messing around with Malfoy. He feels quite stupid about that.

I'm so glad you liked the ending, I always pictured making that part a cliffhanger because it just fits so perfectly. And Aurora..I've had THAT planned for a while to. I thought it would be fun and make Sirius curious, because he does notice certain elements of Alix in her, for obvious reasons.

Yay! I'm relieved that there aren't any errors because I did read through this chapter more times than I have on any other, because of the length and the amount of time it took me to finish it. Funnily enough, this was also the first time I didn't have another person read over the finished product.

Wow, my response is longer than your comment! But I'm overly excited right now as I just saw Deathly Hallows for the first time. I won't say anymore on that subject though! :D

Thanks for the wonderful comments as always. :)

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