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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi!

This is good again, it was nice explaining the emotions that Regulus felt, however a lot of the flashbacks appeared to be more about Sirius than Regulus or Feliciti. And also it would be good to sort of give the adult-Regulus more emotion in the present, where he is with Feliciti, because if he is in limbo with his dead lover surely he would not be as casual as he appears? Just a suggestion.

But good job!

Author's Response: Well, I've sort of imagined that Regulus regarded Sirius as his everything, in a way. He was also just really curious about Sirius/Feliciti's relationship so he ended up observing the two a bit more than focusing on himself or anything :)

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