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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Sorry I'm taking too long to review!

This is a nice idea for a story, taking Regulus through his past to repent for his sins. I like the character of Feliciti, she's like another Luna.

I noticed a few mistakes- there were a few typos in places. Also, before the flashback Regulus and Feliciti were sitting together, and at the end she gets on her tiptoes to kiss him. I think a little more description would do this some good, too :)

But well written, good beginning, well done!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Haha, I suppose I've sort of based her looks on Luna.

Thanks for telling me! I'll look through for them asap!

Thank you for reviewing! Now, onwards to your next :)


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