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Review:FanFiCritic says:
I loved it. I admit, I felt for Ron in this fanfic more than I normally do. and that's saying something! LOL.

I loved, loved, loved the short and to the point letter. It was nice to "end on that note"... (pun intended).

I loved how you matured Draco from the beginning and that they slowly became friends. This is realistic and natural. And I liked it that she left Ron BEFORE Draco was a sexual affair.

I loved the chat with his butler..."school enemy" and "then I'll be fine in the afternoon." Humorous and intelligent writing.

But my favorite lines of all was when you wrote Draco's very deep reason and Hermione picking up on the unspoken wish.

"...but he didn't want to see a Hermione so raw and exposed simply because he still didn't know how to fix it.

...She understood that sometimes that subject was too much to talk about. She decided to go along with it, respecting his unspoken wish."

People in real life can sense all kinds of things... moods, dodging questions, changing subjects, body language telling us what we need to know. I think authors forget about this "other language" that we all completely understand. Perhaps these things are difficult to pen, but you did it well and quite lovely.

Your subject matter (long term effects of war) is also on a deeper level than most stories posted here.

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it very much and find your "deeper" writing style inspiring! Thank you!

Author's Response: I cannot thank you enough.
This review has got to be the best I've gotten so far. Thank you for being so clear and actually pin-pointing the things you liked.
I have to say, this review made my week.
Thank you so much and I hope you read my other postings.

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