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Review:Molly says:
I enjoyed reading this! One thing I would suggest you try to avoid in the future is making dialogues sound too formal. For example, the characters would probably say "can't" instead of "cannot," and "I'm" instead of "I am." While contractions ARE traditionally avoided in writing, it's perfectly okay to use them if they fit the tone and about-ness of the piece. You might also try avoiding over-explaining. Some things are obvious enough without an explanation.

Author's Response: I'm sorry. I have been writing my stories on Microsoft Word, and when I use the spellcheck, it also does a grammercheck. I do not really pay any attention, because it automatically corrects things that I would normally leave as is. I originally do use "can't and I'm," but as I said, the grammercheck automatically makes changes. I will try to keep a better eye on things. Thank you for letting me know.

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