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Review:flawlessbutton says:
I love the ending, really do :O
A few remarks tho: first; didn't you say that hermione was a Head? in that case she'd be in 7th year, and draco's betrayal would've been a year earlier (or has the time-frame just shifted?)
Second: you need to use more comma's to divide the sentences; right now they are to long, and although it is well enough written to be able to keep reading, it will be a big improvement to the whole :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much I have to admit that it's one of my mayor weaknesses but I promise I'm working on them thank you for letting me know what you think by leaving such a lovely review thank you n_n

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