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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
I love the way you include some Black family history kind of casually in the story. You know not the way that you hit it right in the reader's face, like "this is black family history" but have it there and give the story some more background and flesh on the bones. Not that it's just bones otherwise, but you know what I mean, I hope. It kind of creates an atmosphere as well like with Sirius walking around the room thinking about old gloomy things. I also love the way you have made the house in your stories, full with mysteries and hidden rooms. That was a bit hinted on by Rowling, but you really have delved deeper into the mysteries of Grimmauld place.

Your descriptions are great as always and make me jealous!

One thing I have never really understood is how people always recognise other people by the smell of their perfumes or colognes. I definitely can't. Maybe it's because I have never settled for one scent myself and I think everyone else keep changing them too and I don't really recognice anyone else's scent.

Wow! Lily and Sirius had a child?!? And his telling the truth!!! But how did she hide it if she was pregnant, so no one else ever knew?

If I'm allowed to be nitpicky for just one moment: "Was it to late to take it all back?" There's a to which should be a too.

I might have said it a lot of times already, but it makes me so happy to read a Remus and Sirius scene. You write them so well and interesting and you write the dialogue between them so great!

But if it didn't become clear already, this was again overall a great chapter. It's always great to come back to this story.

PS. Could we have a flashback or something? I want some Sirius/Lily. Please.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, hon! We've already discussed the scent issue :P but I still wanted to respond and thank you for reviewing. They did have a child but lost it early on...early enough that no one would notice it. Thanks for the typo and...I agree..I'm about desperate for some Sirius/Lily *sighs*

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