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Review:Dallas says:
I tried. I realy and truly give it my best. I made sure to withhold my judgement until the end of this story, so now i can honestly say. That is the WORST story i have ever read. Your writing is appaling. Your sentence structure is horrific. You never make things flow. Your plot was good but you couldnt follow through. You didnt follow character personality. You had an absolutely disgusting ending.Hermione should've left Ron when he started cheating. The real Hermione would've. You made the ending seem sweet when it sucked. Harry and hermione had 12 kids. 12 kids. They cheated on Ron and kept the charade up for 7 years. Ron cheated with Luna and had 4 kids. Then all their kids went to Hogwarts. WOW. What a touching ending. You made Harry give Dumbledore the portfolio at the end so he could have a dramatic realization. You set up the story so that after hogwarts. There are so many things wrong with your story that this review isnt long enought to write it.Or rather I'm too lazy o write it. Just give up writing please. PLEASE. Do the world a favor. Now undoubtedly you and your idiot editor will reply to my review with cursing and other vulgar remarks. Unfortunately none of them will be clever enoug for me to read. You will have fans that will hate me too. I did enjoy certain aspects of your writing and i will check your account weekly for new stories and chapters in what i hope isnt a futile attmp to encourage you to write, but unless you take a real look at your writing to try ands fix parts of it then your writing will continue to make me want to impale myself on the nearest object.

Author's Response: I'm truly sorry you didn't like my story. But thank you for being honest about it, and for giving it a chance.

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