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Review:littlephoenix says:
Oh snap! I am so sorry for the late review! This was bloody brilliant! I sort of believe this is how the book should have been. Ron being a traitor since his personality kind of resembled Peter Pettigrews. Just kind of tagging a long, quiet, etc. With him being traitor, I was hoping there was some plan involved as to why he would betray the order and his friends. Just kind of makes sense? A parallel meaning relating to the past but with a twist. I loved that little surprise. Actually is more than a little surprise. I think I missed something in the beginning about Ron and why he decided to join the death eaters.

I love how you have Anna battle with her dilemma. But with her being 3 months pregnant and her gaining just a small amount of weight, how is it that Harry hasn't noticed the change? I find it quite fascinating how he is oblivious to it. The way you described the trio getting caught by the death eaters sent chills down my spine. Once again you captured the moment brilliantly! This is by far one of the BEST fan fics here on this site. Intriguing, dark, funny, mysterious, dramatic, and sadistic. I just love how you write. A lot of first person fan fics do not get the recognition they deserve and this falls under that category. You write exceptionally well in first person and it's tricky but you really make the reader feel what anna is going through. Definitely reading more!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the wonderful review!! I don't know what to say except for teh fact that I did not really expect any more reviews for this fanfic. Thank you, once again, as your review is really encouraging and I feel flattered.

Yes...well I do like Ron as he's funny and witty and silly, but I have always believed that he is quite weak in terms of remaining loyal--if that makes any sense whatsoever. The fact that he was frquently jealous with Harry for having all the fame and everything. I would easily see him as turning away from Harry and Hermione's side to join someone else just because he wants more attention. I am really glad you though it was believable and I'm glad it came across as a surprise.

Anna is a character that resembles me (only a little) which made it easy to write about her dilemma at times. With her being three months pregnant and Harry not noticing...yes, it does make Harry seem a bit like an oblivious idiot, but for the sake of the story I had to make him like that.

The Death Eater scene...really? You liked it? I'm really glad you thought it was believable--i did try and I had to delete and re-write the scene a million times. So thank you :).

Oh, Merlin, did you really like it that much? Thank you so much...this review is so encouraging and I'm really glad you find my writing enjoyable. It means a lot to me for you to say that.

Thanks again fro such an amazing review and I am looking forward to read your opinion on the next few chapters.

Merope :)

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