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Review:InLoVEWiTHMuSIC/Ramona says:
For some reasons... I can't submit reviews on my account... Strange, huh?
Anyways, here's Ramona from the forums! This review may be a little late, but it's here!
Well, what can I say?
I enjoyed this, though. The first part was a bit confusing and strange... Just thinking at this things:
- a voice called him from somewhere -- I understand it was his girlfriend who has died. Good.
-he followed the voice, trying to save himself -- He did saved himself , but he was not alive, though. Strange.The only conclusion I can take is that he did saved his soul if there wasn't any chance for the body.
I really loved the Sirius/Regulus/Feliciti kids part. I think that scenes like this may have really happened. Very sweet!

"Embrace it, he thought to himself, You deserved it." - You should emphasize that part - you deserved it-, so it could be clearly that that's a part of his thoughts.

That's quite all I wanted to say. Nice chapter!
9/10

Author's Response: That is quite strange :P
Yeah i wanted the first chapter to be a bit more mysterious than the others :) but it'll all clear up in the last chapter :)

Thank you for reviewing my story! and I'm sorry it took quite a while to reply! been busy and stuff :( Hehe, thanks once again!


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