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Review:RebeLRideR says:
i actually finished this entire story in a day. not that its all that short, i just absolutely could not stop reading! its that amazing! i'm normally pretty picky about the things that i read on HPFF, if a story doesn't draw me in within the first 2 sentences, i move on. . . but this story was the exception. i have to admit that i was slightly apprehensive about reading it because of the title, but i decided to give it a shot. looking back, i am so glad i did! the characters are perfectly developed and the plot is fantastic. one warning i have for you though is to not be too predictable, when u gave the list of all of hermione's possible illnesses it was obvious that she wouldn't actually end up dying. another thing is not to rush through the suspenseful parts- when draco realized that emily was really hermione you could have added a little more angst and questioning which would have eventually led to a more believable romance. . . also, maybe you should add a villain to enhance the plot?? you are a great writer and please please please post a new chapter soon or all of your readers will die of suspense! (:

Author's Response: aww. thanks so much. I'm so glad you like it so much. :D

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